Problem and Solution

Before leaving for Maryland I turned in a copy of my first cut to Dr. Holmevik. We watched it together in his office and he gave me some pointers on things I could improve on. While I was away, he watched it a few more times and thought that the narration had a metallic sound to it and would like me to have Jay Hope do it again with a voice recorder instead of video recording it.
I was able to set up a meeting with Jay Hope for May 21 and went to Greenville to do so.
Drr. Holmevik also thought that some of the pictures I had were grainy and I tried to find some better quality photos, but a lot of the pictures are from the 1920s and later, so the original quality of them is not the best. Having a good quality photo will make my project look better, but for some of the photos, a better quality is just not available.
Before going to Greenville, my computer died again, so I spoke with Apple and they completely replaced my computer, so hopefully those kinds of problems are behind me. Since my computer did not arrive before I met with Jay Hope, I went to the MATRF and borrowed an Olympus digital voice recorder and a microphone.
Now that I have my new computer, I will again work on a new first cut to get out to my committee and client by Monday, June 1. I will be meeting with Dr. Holmevik this Thursday and will have a cut to show him.