Although I have not posted in quite a while I have been working on my project.
After Summer Session I ended I took a little break and then began meeting with Mrs. Ramirez on a pretty frequent basis and also met with Dr. Fishman about changes she would like me to make to my paper. I am keeping a list of revisions requested by my committee so I know what each member has asked me to fix.
I have not received any new comments about my film, but am hoping to receive comments by the end of this week so I can make changes over the weekend and get my third draft out early next week.
Monday, July 27, 2009
Post for 6/25
Since my last post I have been able to meet with both Dr. Skrodzka-Bates and Barbara Ramirez. I met with Dr. Skrodzka-Bates on Tuesday and we discussed how to incorporate race into my film, but she did say that I do not need to change it that much. I am going to incorporate more of the alumnus interviews that I have. She did say that she would rather see me address race in my paper, so I have specific instructions to follow when it comes to that and will work on that this weekend.
I have met with Mrs. Ramirez twice now and we have worked through the Theoretical Context section of my paper. She is helping me to make sure that everything flows the way it should. I have implemented her suggestions and will continue to meet with her until my paper is as perfect as possible.
My plan is to get a second cut of my film and another draft of my paper to my committee by July 1 so that they will have until August 1 to look over it.
I have met with Mrs. Ramirez twice now and we have worked through the Theoretical Context section of my paper. She is helping me to make sure that everything flows the way it should. I have implemented her suggestions and will continue to meet with her until my paper is as perfect as possible.
My plan is to get a second cut of my film and another draft of my paper to my committee by July 1 so that they will have until August 1 to look over it.
Post for 6/17
I have not posted in a while because have gotten a little hectic. The following has happened since my last post:
I will not be able to graduate in August because of my committee’s availability, so I have decided to take research hours in the fall and graduate in December. I have to defend by September 17 and Dr. Holmevik says that it will not be a problem.
I have turned in a first cut to everyone on my committee, Jay Hope, Ron Knorr.
I have received comments from Dr. Skrodzka-Bates and have set up a meeting with her to discuss her comments. I have also received comments from Ron Knorr who suggested I find some different music for one section of my film. Jay Hope also commented and said that the film looks great.
I also turned in another draft of my paper and Dr. Holmevik has given me some feedback and I revised my draft. Dr. Holmevik also suggested I set up an appointment with Mrs. Barbara Ramirez in the 1941. Mrs. Ramirez helps masters and doctoral students with their theses and project papers, so I have set up a meeting with her and will incorporate her comments once I receive them.
I will make a post once I have received more comments and have implemented them.
I will not be able to graduate in August because of my committee’s availability, so I have decided to take research hours in the fall and graduate in December. I have to defend by September 17 and Dr. Holmevik says that it will not be a problem.
I have turned in a first cut to everyone on my committee, Jay Hope, Ron Knorr.
I have received comments from Dr. Skrodzka-Bates and have set up a meeting with her to discuss her comments. I have also received comments from Ron Knorr who suggested I find some different music for one section of my film. Jay Hope also commented and said that the film looks great.
I also turned in another draft of my paper and Dr. Holmevik has given me some feedback and I revised my draft. Dr. Holmevik also suggested I set up an appointment with Mrs. Barbara Ramirez in the 1941. Mrs. Ramirez helps masters and doctoral students with their theses and project papers, so I have set up a meeting with her and will incorporate her comments once I receive them.
I will make a post once I have received more comments and have implemented them.
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